she said: show me something graceful and fluid nothing in neon or those horrible '80s colours and nothing heavy-metal hard... something lounge music and soft as eyelashes show me something substantial, that'll last... that'll still be fashionable come fall show me something with addiction, something heroin chic or nicotine stained or d.t. marvellous and awed... something with a step program and a bad rep something with plush costumes and a good view something more interesting than slot-machine mania... show me something that will ease...
you scribbles have always ended so well. i particularly like this one. 'show me something that will ease' -- it's an incomplete thought that is so perfectly complete.
i dig the way you use pop-culture/outside references as adjectives instead of cookie-cutter phrases but still i'm left with a "what's the point of this" feeling
