these things

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Nick Scratch, Jun 17, 2008.

  1. Nick Scratch

    Nick Scratch Member

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    We record it because it happens

    We record births and deaths
    We record marriages and we record assaults
    We record ourselves on video and watch it later
    sometimes

    I am recording the phrase “We record”
    and pasting it each time I need to use it

    We record birthday parties

    We record natural disasters and we record the casualties
    We record the survivors

    We record the number of teeth in our mouthes at regular
    intervals throughout our childhoods
    We record the number of bacteria in samples of our excreta
    when we are ill and add those numbers to our permanent files

    We don't record the fact the permanent file outlives us

    They record television programs and We record the program
    when it airs to watch at a later time
    and then sometimes we watch it

    We record the inner workings of small town municipal councils
    and store them away

    We record the score

    We record dissent

    We record messages on our answering machines in hope
    of receiving calls when we are not around to accept them
    because it makes us feel needed

    We record the names of the prime ministers

    We record the terrible things we can do one another and
    then We record ourselves pretending to do those things
    as a form of entertainment

    We record ourselves arguing the perversity of that

    We record groups of us fucking and then We record how much
    we made selling others a chance to see the recordings

    We record our loves

    We keep records of all these things because we have to
    because we are quite sure these things really happened
    but we record them anyway because a small part of us
    always doubts the world is something that's actually happening
    out there and in spite of us

    these things, these recordings are memory made solid

    and even if no one watches or reads them
    they exist
    and that's proof enough.
     
  2. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    The entire piece made me smile, it has such a cynical tone throughout.
    [We record the terrible things we can do one another] I think you're missing a "to" in there. I thought that maybe the repetition of "we record" would get to be too much, but it actually worked well, you had good pauses and it all fit well.
     
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