I wrote this song

Discussion in 'Performing Arts' started by rydns, Jun 12, 2008.

  1. rydns

    rydns Member

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    So many words
    left unsaid
    so many
    pins up on the map
    the places I have never been

    The heart strings you've tugged
    come undone
    I've never felt as much as this
    and my best guess
    is that it's love

    and I love you
    do you love me
    like I love you
    I sure hope so
    I sure hope so

    she rocks
    she rolls
    she rides

    all over town
    for an open door
    too

    a house
    a heart
    a home

    she says she's gotta get out shes gonna paint this town
    red
    red
    red
    red
    red

    My last crusade
    another day
    so many chances to be had
    the trials over
    try again

    Let me rest
    cold hospital beds
    I have come to you for help
    you haven't seen a case this bad

    In all your days
    and nights you've spent
    like a fools gold
    in this river town
    Im down
    Im down
    Im down
    Im down


    she rocks
    she rolls
    she rides

    all over town
    for an open door
    too

    a house
    a heart
    a home

    she says she's gotta get out shes gonna paint this town
    red
    red
    red
    red

    MY FRIENDS HAVE YOU READ
    THE HEADLINE THAT SAID
    THERE WAS A CAR CRASH
    BOTH DRIVERS DEAD

    and I guess
    that's just how we got out

    collide
    atmosphere
     
  2. Any Color You Like

    Any Color You Like Senior Member

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  3. dancing bear92

    dancing bear92 Member

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    Absolutely awesome, I wish my songs came out like that. Refine it and sing it!
     
  4. rydns

    rydns Member

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    Walked in on a car crash they were
    half way through the after math
    and I feel insane
    I've got 8 different names
    tangled hair kept neatly and your
    skin it smells how sweet peas taste
    and yeah
    I'm ok because I believe
    I believe in jesus we hang
    out downtown on Mondays
    and we smoke
    hand rolled cigarettes and we place bets
    on
    all the rabbit
    morons
    moving across
    this rabid country

    I'm greedy and my greed shows weakness like an evergreen
    I'm going into town with a pocket full of coins for some pickpocketing
    yeah

    And your wrinkles were all box like
    and they held on too you so damn tight
    you've waited all your life
    for this one single light
    and I've never found a savior or an audience
    worth saving
    I cant imagine that?
    there can't be limits
    the scene is at a climax
    and your distracted by a camera flash
    there's so much more to be seen
    behind all those scenes
    and ages later they will say
    oh my god they look so blurry

    I'm greedy and my greed shows weakness like an evergreen
    I'm going into town with a pocket full of coins for some pickpocketing
    yeah
     
  5. dancing bear92

    dancing bear92 Member

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    That was good too, whats your songwriting process?
     
  6. rydns

    rydns Member

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    I live.
     

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