Tatoo

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Blkrubbersoul, Jun 11, 2008.

  1. Blkrubbersoul

    Blkrubbersoul Member

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    she whispers latin
    when she's bored.
    our rapport;
    my frown's most
    discrete little morph.
    symbolic fortune cookies
    open in accord;
    i find letters
    in my mouth sometimes.
    she never tells me
    what they're for.

    she wrote:
    "in the wake of rising authority;
    i move in the moonlight,
    i groove in the hindsight,
    complimenting my limelight
    and insubordinance.
    perceptive of
    my plight in conformity,
    these artists just annoy me;
    a plague to worn pencils every night."


    my pen weighs more than myself right now.
    i hope this isn't permanent.
     
  2. rastas edible

    rastas edible Member

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    nice man...the first stanza is pure jazz and symmetry...the last line is a killer finish...good write...
     
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