all a dream

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by bluesafire, Jun 11, 2008.

  1. bluesafire

    bluesafire Senior Member

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    To this moment I return
    no comparison
    here, within, I live

    All that out there
    has caught my attention
    and I wandered awhile

    When did I become lost?
    I only know
    when I return

    It was a dream,
    all a dream.
    I shudder upon waking
     
  2. rastas edible

    rastas edible Member

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    "it was a dream, all a dream...i shudder upon waking"...that line was a poem all by itself...
     
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