heaven

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by bluesafire, Jun 11, 2008.

  1. bluesafire

    bluesafire Senior Member

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    this still heart
    i settle into my skin,
    a careful breath

    sweet silence
    pulsating
    waiting

    so gentle is this space
    sacred
    fragile like a butterfly wing

    i rest in the womb
    of safety
    that is... heaven
     
    bluesafire, Jun 11, 2008
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  3. rastas edible

    rastas edible Member

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    i like the whole idea of this poem...we see heaven before we are born, not when we die..the first stanza rocks...and rolls from the tongue (hee-hee)...
     
    rastas edible, Jun 11, 2008
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  5. The Instinct

    The Instinct Member

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    short but sweet, I should learn from you and other who write shorter poems, I can't seem to do it. haha. Anyway, good one. Keep writing.
     
    The Instinct, Jun 11, 2008
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