catch 22

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Blkrubbersoul, Jun 4, 2008.

  1. Blkrubbersoul

    Blkrubbersoul Member

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    a
    trained eye
    can see bias
    even in an ant hill.

    among the shareholders
    of faith and knowledge;
    this is where
    the procreation of progress
    is dominant.
    ominous gesundheits
    handed out like social ornaments;
    the sun sets
    begging for a lesser involvement.

    religion: decision,
    revision of your faith;
    intermission.
    a mission, a vision,
    a wish upon a star
    for a listen.
    a fallen
    rendition of the
    failures to mention
    exactly where the rope ends,
    and your neck
    becomes the tension...

    "opiate for the people"
    is a copout.
    "lazy" would be more
    appropriate.
     
  2. The Instinct

    The Instinct Member

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    flows pretty nice. I read this once before too, but I guess that's why you have to go back and read some again. Moods change all the time and sometimes you come across some that are just fitting. Anway, I like it, good job.
     
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