wish my life was perfect

wishing upon many stars
each and every night
to be the perfect princess in your eyes

yet that wish never came true
instead i was cinderella in your eyes

the one who did your laundry
the one who took care of you
the one that never spoke up

and you never even thanked me
just critizied me of my faults

yet i was nothing to you
but white trash that could be a servant to you
and for you to call me horrible names

but one night i wished upon a tiny yellow star
crying my heart out...
for someone to take me away from this dungeon of mine

i thought the day would never come
and i would be stuck with you and my stepsister

worry that i may get hurt over and over
to be bash with name calling
and do this and that for you all day

till one starry night
my prince came and took me away
from the damp dungeon i lived in

and he gave me a crown and a huge castle to live in
but most of all he gave me his love and protection
so you and my stepsister can never hurt me ever again

 

i absolutely love love poems...
this is really good.
<3

 

wow, i love it, well done

 

thanks guys for the comments.ashhy

 

I could have sworn I responded to this poem. Wonder what happend. Anyway, I thought I said that what you wrote sounded a lot like someone I once knew. I thought that what you wrote was very good. Good job.

 

thanks...i wrote from the heart and what was going on at the time of my life. thanks for the comment and i thought you did as well,.,,but thanks for the comment ashhy

 

I love it!

Good job.

 

thanks... thanks for the comment..ashhy