Nostalgy

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Pellinore, May 28, 2008.

  1. Pellinore

    Pellinore Member

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    I wrote this yesterday night, yet again, like the previous poem i posted here it is just a emotional reflection, the words are just a stream of thougts. My english vocabulary isn't that great but i tried to reflect this feeling of nostalgy i had.

    Nostalgy

    Laying in my bed,
    Memories of childhood,
    Lost ignorance,
    A lost treasure.

    The days passing by,
    Untouched.
    A loss of memory,
    A loss of awareness.
    A feeling, vague,
    dominating vagueness.
    Endless.

    A laugh of evil,
    Tormenting me,
    Breaking my mind,
    In a thousand pieces.

    Everything is just a,
    mere reflection of the past.
    What a joke,
    It is all a joke.

    A slave of the waves and tides,
    we call society.

    I quit, no more nostalgy.
    A one way ticket to the moon,
    Farewell.
     
  2. Vetty214

    Vetty214 Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    What is your language? Italian? I would like to see this in your native tongue if you originally wrote it in Italian... I don't know Italian but have read some translated Italian poetry.

    This is pretty good! I enjoyed the first stanza very, very much... and your description of society... as slaves to waves and tides.
     
  3. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    i really like this.
    it conveys your feeling pretty well, i think.
    <3
     
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