Mornings

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Blkrubbersoul, May 20, 2008.

  1. Blkrubbersoul

    Blkrubbersoul Member

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    At mornings, going past
    the same eroded homeless man that
    disagrees with this idea
    of him; he has a bin to keep
    his clothes in, and he fumbles
    when by his bench, on the corner of the square,
    there are students, or some other
    section of society, demonstrating
    over this or that.
    And I’m passing by, on the way
    to higher education, higher population;

    And I drink out with my friends, listen
    when they say, “You see too much.”
    I laugh and then I stop. I say:
    “Sometimes I wish I was
    more blind.”
    I wouldn’t mind not seeing
    the homeless man,
    crying for his clothes, after
    the sanitation people came and took away
    everything he owned,
    when he was driven away,
    away from his home,
    by student asking for
    better human rights.
     
  2. The River North

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    I love the ending. Overall this is a very good piece. Some grammatical errors you may want to pick up on.
     

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