For those of you who enjoy a good salad

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by whitlam, May 14, 2008.

  1. whitlam

    whitlam Member

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    Close your eyes,
    not your mind. but your eyes

    and picture, picture, picture.

    Salad.

    Not sausage, nor sandwich or surrogate sister.

    But Salad

    lush tomato, with hate and endearment intwined assimilating into
    spurs as courage, and assure. create a salad so pure
    that with each bite, your life flickers in harmony with the contempt of 6 billion strangers.

    and cheese, small, fetter dice, consumed in invariable form. Your tongue, insidious,
    delirium delight, salad and might.

    with your budding taste, your taste bud caps the capsicum.
    a callous crunch. Green and red, when your freedom bled, you saw star
    and planet anonymous.

    and carrot of orange, belated pleasure
    time fragment treasure. Slice of carrot, a quest to your unconscious.

    and pine nuts, courageous. rectify enthusiasm! steep, inward chasm, flavor

    of your ripe soul. and your goal? to taste.

    without haste! down the onion, with a slow soothing bite, uncooked brackets
    containing a word you know well.

    with glass and wine, caress continence with creation.

    Run amuck! with breezing lettuce, a leaf. a Herbivore fractal. A heaven, a contractual ascending of primitive prophet. "adam thus eve"

    and soft pallet tickle! as fresh olive negates your destiny for moment under moon.

    Salad! Dressing! Earth and Atmosphere. Cream topping, spinning spice through your spores. Through your door, you claw and dis-reason is relentless. As is orange slither, like lightning in sky, or devious woman. Spirit, Sweetness, contrast.

    Apple incentive. The chief was inventive! He sculpted apple
    With seed and security, parading your pallet, texture and ridicule.

    And vivacious crouton. Wheat of earth. Carbon copy carbohydrate, but cooked crunch cringe and beautiful sensibility.

    Spice hallucination, Herb Indoctrinate you. You are now a dogma.

    Parsley and cavern of pain.
    Sage and enlightenment
    Thyme, healing all wounds but one.

    The hunger still untouched.
     
  2. Vetty214

    Vetty214 Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    This was fun to read, very good rhyming that doesn't overpower. Linguistic pleasure obvious! I love vivacious crouton! great fun!
     
  3. Keeper of the Forest

    Keeper of the Forest Member

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    thats awesome., i love it
     
  4. redyelruc

    redyelruc The Yard Man

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    This was fun to read. I too, like Inearthed, had visions of a crazy frenzied chef trying to explain his passions. Great imagery, light and fun. An overall good job.
     
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