How can i unlock my heart to someone so dear to me? How can i unfold all my thoughts to a person i love so much? yet deep inside my soul is filling with acid bubbles waiting to burst each moment of my life to take away the very blood inside me and to replace acid in my veins instead I weep inside for someone to help me but i keep my pain to myself not wanting to hurt anyone else but myself instead my organs rot as i lay here dead to the world wondering if i can fight this loosing battle or if i should just give up and be still in a coffin for years to come
hmm i like it. there's something about it that i can't put my finger on, which makes me like it. so it's good. [:
no doubt your a highly senstive person just like i am too. existential loneliness really sucks big time! it is thought, a part of what makes us human. yes, your poem is too true. i like it alot! thank you for sharing it with us.
i guess i am...im not really sure if im really sensitive. At times i feel a little lonely but not all the time. I write dark poetry from the heart and thats about it. Thanks for the comment ashhy
