My Daily Three New Poems: Read Enjoy Comment

1.
Heartbroken tick-tocks
cracked sounds,
whipping down the stairway
Running away from itself

Echoed whispers, frozend in the dark
Exploding tears, collapsing starlight
Dissolving a life into the make believed

Far away enough to try to be someone else
2.
I am the shade
Burnt against the light
Suffering inside of day instead of in the cloak of night
Tortured each day, all alone
A dark mirror that doesn't belong
3.
I hear the rain
I look out of the window
Upon the phases of time
Falling from life to death
Unable to fly
Having more purpose in death than in life
Heart beats exploding for the last time

 

1.
Comfort in my home
Lonilness I have found in the world
Emotions I unfurled
In the moments I have known

How alien life is
To such a dreamer
Where do I belong?
Outside of where I have dreamed
2.
Kitchen of dreams
Shattered wine glasses
Pondering out of a fantasy window

Dinners set aside in an empty dinning room
Left out each night to become cold

Broken starlight falling through the night's sky
Death's heartbeats whisking by

All of the backstage of life

 

Very nice effort there WrittenSouls.

But your writing here is very hard to understand, for e.g:

"Comfort in my home
Lonilness I have found in the world"

I wish you the best!

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You feel how "lost" this person is... how alone. There is a contrast (comfort at home - assume alone at home) while there is lonliness in the world (where everyone else is.) What a clincher... to not even belong in your own dreams... very interesting and creative.

 

Thanks for the feedback everyone. Here is some new poems I recently wrote.

1.
Paper hearts
Origami hearts
Black inked love

A Folded memory
Worn and torn
Wrinkled in a faded denim pocket

A buried treasure
Black diamonds
Each time: The essence of a hug

2.
Cavern of thoughts
The cold breathes of dragon bones
Encaging my faceted sapphire heart

Ambivalent Ambiance, shadows upon walls
Ambiguous as clustered clouds
Inkblot waterfalls

Caving, excavating aimlessly
Wandering for meaning
Through earth's heart

3.
The landscape of my eyes
Reflections bouncing off their skys
Shadows imitating a sunset and sunrise
Overlapping a crystal garden for my soul

A dream world, unseen, unforgotten
Memories weaved yet unlived, unspoken
Walking upon Broken starlight

4.
Dark moonlight
Seeping through starlight
Tucked into the clouds
Into shades of blues

Dreaming and thinking
Upon the beds of the sky
Casting down shadows
As storms brews into a lullaby

5.
Broken starlight
Concealed in a jar

Frayed angel feathers
Forming a dream catcher

Dull pixie dust
In a money bag

Tears from a mermaid
Upon an old rag

In a man's basement

6.
Kitchen of dreams
Shattered wine glasses
Pondering out of a fantasy window

Dinners set aside in an empty dinning room
Left out each night to become cold

Broken starlight falling through the night's sky
Death's heartbeats whisking by

All of the backstage of life