what are you scared of

hi im wondering if our true worry
is the western way being changed by allowing
this world to be in peace.....................

what the hell is happening to people
are you all afraid of the path taken so long ago
history tells all
its now the time the world is at its most saddest.......
west against all we knew bush blair we voted them
if not how the hell did they get in government...

wake up uk and the usa we are the people
stop this system before its us they go after
and they will maybe in a hundred years but it will be
us we speak out against these in power.....

now work that out........

i hope we as a world can be as one
but this war shows me my inner fear
you dont want peace you dont want love
you want greed money slaves
like me......

just a thought i know you will laugh
love n peace from saff
its now that will cause the downfall the west
will give us this much.........

 

I;m not sure what that was about. But assuming you are the voice for peace, the voice needs to learn about grammer.

 

Nothing better then grammar-police who misspell "grammar".

 

HonkyTonk, you need to study up on your poetry, specifically poetic license. And your spelling too, since you want to be so critical of others...

 

wow caught me on a technicality. It was a typo. That doesn't resemble any form of prose i have ever heard. But I also have a dislike for poetry in general.

 

You have the most bestest grammer on the forums.

 

omg gee thanks alots. I tries my damndedest.

 

I fear the day that emperor bush's patriot act # 5 puts cameras in all our homes.

 

I thought the poem(or was it just rambling) sucked. There is no flow, takes you in to many directions. I suggest starting with say...roses are red, violets are....

 

WTF?

is this English class??

geez.Ok..Mr.Pulitzer

 

Thanks otter, you added nothing usefull to this thread. Good Job!

 

Neither did you bandit...

 

Nor shall I

 

Damn.... now I cant think of anything intellegent to say. DAMMMMMMNNNNN you guy who misspelled grammar!!!!!! Oh yeah, the poem seemed like something that might sound good, If I was was really high/drunk/sped up at a reading. But on paper, it sucks. (thats just my opinion though)

 

Wait, was it a poem? I'm confused.

 

dear all thanks for reading yes i spell crap but at least i know alittle
about history and maybe you all should stop attacking each other on here
and wake up to the world in its down fall
will you be able to cope in a western world that has to change......\
i dont think so you only write what you have heard
i write what i feel..............

and as for grammar in what way
i dont care how i write at least i
speak out against any who judges people on belief and colour......

and as for peace it shall never be if you all
continue to cast an opinion that enforces a government
to allow the total control like they have over you people

i suggest you reread the texts on our history your history before you annoy others
with your blag
war is not the way to peace
and as for america well just look at its own poverty
the world will do better without the usa and uk being
so lacking in understanding for other beliefs at the end of the day
its about religion really whos god said what first...
oil is just one big cover up and i hope we wake up to this soon

no matter what you read about this war history has already written our outcome.
just sleep well tonight because in the future it will be our grand
children who suffer...............

thank you as for me being peaceful yes i am but i have an opinion
and 3 children who agree this war is wrong like all the rest
its not for the usa or uk to decide how others live thier live,

at least i have the brain to see past such mass brain washing as the amercians who believe terroists are from the east....
wake up, blair and bush have you in the palm of thier hands
and my poem yes it lacks the way i feel
so here goes

when you view the mirror in the morning
place the morning air upon your lungs
becareful not to burn yourself
your opinions are what you have heard....

be stronge for its now that matters....
thankyou for reading again
im sure you will find the peace you so deserve or not..
love n peace from saff
ps i blag as good as you.........

but the difference is i believe ............

 

This is kinda like that part in 8 Mile, when emenim (or however you spell it) initiates the rap off. I wish I could contest, but sadly I have No Skillz.

 

Saff, I totally agree. But you need to look a little closer, + yeah, my spelling + grammar is crap to all U others. Now look, F*n Bush invaded England + did something to Blair when he 1st went to the USA to camp david, + also Bush brought his own private army along with him when he visited our Queen. . All I have to say is watch Fahreneit 9/11 movie. I knew about all this crap b4 it happened. but Blair is + will go the EU way if it comes to the crunch seeing as the EU has declared that war illegal. I.E its all about a Texan oil greedy pillock that is also hooked on power. Or rather he may be a puppet, but he seems to be the sort that wants power + money. Oh, B.T.W Blair does not even realise that he sides with a TORY / Conservitave government !!! I.E, Republicans are tory + the Democratic party is like Labour over here. But, something odd happened.

Anyway Saff has quite a bit right, + now you have more of the picture. + B.T.W, I do not know saff , I only just this min looked up her postings when I responded to some of her poetry.

HC

 

+ B.T.W, Rome the biggest empire falled in documentoried history, + what is happening now? It horrifies me cos human lives are a risk. But like the romans a massive quake happened in Calafornia + the natives will retake control which I like the sound of in 1 way. But, lives lost, I weep + cry for all the lost lives as I know that the USA will fall . I Beg that the USA people in true power will give mercy + to give up their Earth gobbling greed, let peace rule 4 it's too late ).

 

+ b.t.w gEo_tehaD_returns , do you remember in the cold war in the 80's + all the propaganda crap they told us about Russia having vid cam's all over? Well, here in Britain, they are f*n everywhere. Talk about hypocrisy aye lol. They 1st plugged it as evil + a bad thing, then they suddenly said ' Hey, we want to potect U all ' etc. F*n hypocrits lol. + as for Russia, since 'So called' democracy + freedom' came in, there are more starving in the streets now than they ever was + without medical healthcare etc. Sucks aye?