Tunage (feedback for pls)

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    as the daylight blooms
    and the light assumes
    those quizzical shapes
    left to displace
    the shadows
    as they're gripping the drapes
    in a hollow hand
    with its every texture
    just a hologram
    just as cold as a slaloms sand
    I realize that the stars are grand
    as the light etches in reflections
    of a larger plan
    and i display the doubts
    of a startled man
    while they try to glow like embers
    that usually my heart would fan
    but today just played a song
    it wasn't long and it was of soft demand
    claiming i was only wrong
    because i stood where the accosted stand
    and still i felt alone and felt my tomb
    stretched all across the land
    I turned my ears against the music
    in high hopes that i could change deciet
    into some other form of bread
    while still I fed upon the strangest meat
    the blood of which ran to the ground
    and somehow had stained my feet
    never seeing the stain only came
    when I claimed defeat
    and still the music played
    but now the refrain was strangely sweet
    so I enjoyed the untuned chords
    and danced to it's gangly beat
    and as I was searching for the words
    that when heard would claim my songs complete
    I realized the tuneage is my life
    and the lyrics are the words I speak
     

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