a song I'm still working on, about a troubled girl with intelligence but no positive outlook on life. Katy was a good girl, but she liked to do bad stuff silver spoon in mouth, money, she always had enough She was an honor roll student, who was bound for success Found herself feeling alone, unwanted, and depressed She snuck out at night, just to get her last fix Came home, stumbling, in the morning around six The weekends were her only time to be free Doing drugs like Cocaine, meth and ectasy Monday morning, she always came to school late had her homework done, hungover, she'd wait Till school started, to go and walk outside Skipping became instinct, but still she would hide She snuck out at night, just to get her last fix Came home, stumbling, in the morning around six The weekends were her only time to be free Doing drugs like Cocaine, meth and ectasy She didn't know what life had in store Try to quit drugs, she wanted more and more They were more important then life to her Her life and problems she'd blatantly ignore But that day came when she would OD Fall down the stairs because she couldn't see Her body just couldn't take it anymore Breathing stopped, she saw but a blur She snuck out at night, just to get her last fix Came home, stumbling, in the morning around six The weekends were her only time to be free Doing drugs like Cocaine, meth and ectasy She snuck out that night, just to get her last fix Came home, stumbling, in the morning around six Had too many pills, mixed with some alchohol Ended up dead, with no outlook at all
That's not bad man. I'm a songwriter/producer/musicinan/monkey myself. I like how you tell a whole story rather than just rhymes and metaphors. Kinda folk like.. Kinda reminds me of a punk bad called Rancid, there's a song they wrote called "Red Hot Moon" reminds me of that song. Keep writing!
