Impressions cannot truly depict a being The conviction of walk is appealing Living strong beneath conquered disease To appease the future you do behold Hopeful gazing holds no concealing It is amazing this feeling Needing change creates the impulse of leaving Or wanting depending on state of affair Melancholy from remembrance of loving Tasteful disdain hoping there will be no shoving Off limits challenges intoxication Probable reconciliation Recantation to blossom one’s patience Repetition to saw through the wreckage Tattooed grip often worn as a necklace Anecdotes bringing distress to candid Unconsciously thinking of fables Branded deeply by transparent labels Glassy sight to enforce righteousness Cursed attuned from the beauty of blessed Will you travel alone on your quest? To be proving that lonesome works best? Using my talent to press the included And prudent to prefer the best Which, of course, is you my dear.
wow i like that... my poem is called 'to' i would like it if you let me know what you think as you are soo talented i would value your opinion. thanks
It's a little vague and unfocussed for my tastes. After a second read I still come away feeling like I haven't read anything. Next time could you not leave a line between each... line?
