meaning

Discussion in 'Writers Forum' started by haven, Apr 17, 2008.

  1. haven

    haven Member

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    i took a walk around the pond

    to see what i could see

    i looked deep into the water well

    and made a wish for peace



    i took a walk around my house

    to see what i could see

    i looked deep into all my shit

    and made a wish for less



    i took a walk around my mind

    to see what i could see

    i looked deep into the center

    and wished for more



    i don't want to live a life

    that has no meaning at the end

    i don't want to live a life

    full of useless things

    i want to live a life

    of love and peace and serentiy



    i took a chance and watched tv

    i heard the news again

    everyone's dying today and tomorrow

    they say theres just no chance

    and i wished for the end



    well, no one has all the answers

    to lifes immortal quest

    true meaning is found

    in the simple things around



    so i think i'll take a walk

    around my family today

    and hug and smile

    and tell em i love em

    becuase thats all i have to give
     
  2. Opinionated

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    wonderful! The flow is a touch off in some places, but the imagery is great. more please? =)
     

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