A poem/story of sorts.

Discussion in 'Mind Games' started by Natch, Apr 16, 2008.

  1. Natch

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    God forgives me of this poem.
     
  2. XBloodyNailPolishX

    XBloodyNailPolishX Forgetful Philosopher

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    This is the Mindfuck section... not Poetry Corner... go to the Writer's Forum.
     
  3. edenfield

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    i think its fine just here. it feels like a sacred mindfuck
     
  4. XBloodyNailPolishX

    XBloodyNailPolishX Forgetful Philosopher

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    how is it sacred and how is it a mindfuck? Seems just like amateur poetry to me.
     
  5. Natch

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    God is love.
     
  6. XBloodyNailPolishX

    XBloodyNailPolishX Forgetful Philosopher

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    MindFuck: Trippy story, question, quiz or riddle that is full of conundrums and double meanings. Literally fucks your mind.
    Sad poem: Sad poem.
     
  7. edenfield

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    its sacred cos its from spirit. anything that comes from there is sacred in my eyes...its mindfuck cos i felt the loss. which as he says is a mindfuck in itself
     
  8. XBloodyNailPolishX

    XBloodyNailPolishX Forgetful Philosopher

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    Losing a friend is a tragedy.
    A nearly impossible riddle or puzzle is a mindfuck.
     
  9. Hesh

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    its a mindfuck that a nailpolish can be so closed.

    dirty mountain ice.
     
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    XBloodyNailPolishX Forgetful Philosopher

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  11. edenfield

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    agreed, which, unfortunatley,,, for us less than enlightened folk out here, causes our heads to mash.
     
  12. XBloodyNailPolishX

    XBloodyNailPolishX Forgetful Philosopher

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    it causes us to be sad and depressed, and even perhaps ask "why"?
    But its logical. People die. There are plenty of reasons for death
    - injury
    - disease
    - old age
    - suicide
    - overdose
    - etc.
    There are plenty of perfectly logical reasons people die. Hardly a mindfuck.
     
  13. perkyperks

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    Thats the whole point of the mind fuck. You named the LOGICAL reasons people die. But what if it has nothing to do with logic.

    What if before we got here we chose which lessons we would like to learn to make our souls stronger? And when that mission is completed we are ready to leave this physical realm and enter into another.
    Entering more enlightened, more empathetic etc.

    So it really is a mind fuck b/c the logical reasons of passing away are really just a cover up for people who have finished their mission and are on their way home!

    (ANd Natch, I do feel your pain. I lost my very best friend a few years ago)
     
  14. edenfield

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    have the same thoughts meself.
    and because of these thoughts it has knocked my whole understanding of reality. brought more acceptance, responsibility, and i'm kinda not as troubled with the 'not minding what happens' too much,...very empowering response. thanks
     

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