steel blue eyes

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by blackheartbitch, Mar 26, 2008.

  1. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    steel eyes staring off out of reality,
    mind out of body,
    trying to wrap oneself around a mental escape,
    pretending that one cannot be seen
    but they are merely a ripple in time
    that stands back and watches
    the world pass by,
    as people change and seasons weather
    this one remains the same empty soul,
    this one with steel eyes staring off out of reality
    has made those who had once seen them,
    think and believe, that this one's mental fanstasy is reality,
    so in a world full of life,
    this one merely watches it pass by them, waiting,
    hoping, for someone to see them and bring
    reality back into this one's steel blue eyes.

    Day after day passes by and still stuck in their dazed state,
    steel eyes staring off out of reality,
    mental notions deteriorating as the times pass,
    stuck watching history, remembering others' pasts,
    but never living one's own life just observing others live as they stay an unliving cloud of unreality ever floating but never noticed against the neon blue sky.
     
  2. The Instinct

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    I liked this, reminds me of someone I know and live with.
     
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