My love

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by tweetie227, Sep 21, 2004.

  1. tweetie227

    tweetie227 Member

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    my one n true love is gone.

    now i must find the will to carry on.

    my heart is broken n crying

    but i must not give up n stop trying.

    although i will never talk to him again,

    i wish that our friendship we had will never end
     
  2. kidder

    kidder Member

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    It sounds like the centrepiece or chorus for a larger work.Get that guitar out and add some more. You're on the right road. And every road leads eventually to heart and home. And peace of mind. Keep at it.
     

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