Dragon Flowers

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Writtensouls, Jan 29, 2008.

  1. Writtensouls

    Writtensouls Member

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    Dragon flowers

    Black spider-web peddles

    Crimson red stems

    Ivory white teeth

    Blue dragon fire

    Midnight creatures
     
  2. skyfire

    skyfire Member

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    uhm...i dont really know what to do with this one. it needs some tension...or something. they're good details, but its only a list of details, not so much a dynamic poem...unless i just dont get it...
     
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