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The Knowledgeable Tide

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Icurus, Dec 30, 2007.

  1. Icurus

    Icurus Member

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    I will approach in full as a slow moving tide,
    not one in defense.
    In like manner those will step forward in curiosity,
    to speak of things known by all,
    weak, and strong,
    right, or wrong,
    what they read is known, and shame is silent for those who have
    taken of these,
    for them that have not feel pride; who is the better?;
    the one's whom take pride in their ways?,
    or for them who show shame in those days?.
    I shall tumble out words like bread just this side of full,
    and bring in thee end a thunderous climax that fades as a whisper,
    to leave to each a far off hypnotic stare,
    as to look through a lone candle flame in a dark room not hot, nor cold,
    just silence in that time, silence unaware,
    caught up in wonder,
    to each their own,
    their own silent stare.......


    Devon Knight / Icarus


    Hello S/Fire, and all I have missed for a life time, I feel I've come home.......
     
  2. skyfire

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    I like this...you pulled off a very nostalgic feel, like the tide...
     
  3. Icurus

    Icurus Member

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    Well!, you know me well enough to know my mind, as well as how I express
    my mind in the written, it was a thought on a book entirely of my past posts,
    and how I'd start, remain, and end, that I might catch each individual mind
    and leave all to their own interpretation, (sp?), that's what that was all about.

    L & L my Dear S/Fire,
    Devon.
     
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