i have an insanely dirty mind for 14... Haha

The building next door was blasting the song Paralyzer so loud, I could hear it perfectly, Although, it was on repeat. I stood by the dumpster waiting for Acer to shut the door. He heard the song playing and walked my ways singing softly:


"If you’re body matches what you’re eyes can do...."

He ended the phrase by grabbing me and leaning me over his arm. My leg kicked up and
my heart beating fast. He leaned over and kissed me intensely. My body was shot with violent waves of warmth. I started to giggle and shake a bit. Acer knew when I did this that it only meant good for us. He smiled and started kissing my collarbone, making his way to the side of my neck, gently nibbling it. My heart beat faster and I couldn’t stand it anymore.

I grabbed him in a lustful kiss and shoved him against the brick wall. My mind was rasing as to what I should do next. I got off him and pulled him with me as I ran to the end of the ally. The alley made a turn that went in about 10 feet and then left to a dead end of another brick wall. I could still hear Paralyzer blasting and this only got me more in the mood.
He grabbed me and shoved me hard against the wall. I felt so alive. I kissed him intensely and he spun me off the wall and onto the ground. I started kissing him even more and he moved me closer to the ground and then off it and repeating as dozen times. We breathed heavy and I started to pull of his jacket as he did the same to me. I rolled him over while still clinging to him and I was on top of him now.


I pulled off my shirt and pulled off his too. We continued to roll around and yank off clothes until I was down to my thong and necklaces and he was down to his boxers. He kissed his way down my stomach and pulled my thong off with his teeth. I took my finger and whispered:

"Incendia."

My fingertip turned red and heated up. I slid it down the side of his boxers and they slipped off him. I giggled and he rolled on top of me and kissed me insanely intensely and I shook all over. My heart was beating so fast, I could feel it beat in my toes. He laid over me and entered. Thrusting as hard as he could without hurting me. I was out of breathe he was so amazing. He leaned me up and continued. I was on the verge of screaming my heart out when he started bitting my neck more. I moaned and dug my nails into his back. He loved it when I did this. It made him thrust harder.

That was it. I couldn’t hold it in anymore. I reached the big O and it was amazing. I nearly screamed with every thrust. I cried out "I love you!" and "Oh god!" a dozen times. After 40 minutes of non stop mind blowing sex, we stopped because we were insanely tired. I could hardly breathe. I cuddled up to Acer and sighed:

"I haven’t been fucked like that sense grade school."
"What?" he asked.
"Nothing, I just always wanted to say that, because Marla said it in Fight Club."

"I see."


He grabbed me in another kiss and half way into it I said:

"Shit! We were supposed to be a the store!"

 

It's decent writing. Starts kinda abrupt. And your age makes it kinda offensive. I like it. You should keep it up, turn it in as an assigment in school. It'll cause all kinds of commotion.

 

Dateline's "To catch a predator" internet lackeys are upset at this misleading thread.

 

Speaking as an internet predator, I approve of this thread.

 

haha

advanced writing for a 14 year old girl but very provocative!

bad girl!

 

That line from Fight Club = Great.
That was a crazy movie.

 

Well, I was writing a long ass story for a friend and i had this in there so that explains why its starts off so weird.


lol, yeah, my writting is really dirty.
In almost every story I have written, people fuck. Alot

 

Thats a really ghey song TBH

 

Lust and violence are the heart of all great stories, because people are essentially animals, and that's the realism that makes excellent literature/film/stories.

Keep it up. It's good.

 

Thanks

i could send you the begining of it if you wanna read it

 

I'm pretty picky with grammatical errors, and needless to say there were quite a few in there.

However, other than that, it was quite OK. All of us teens think of crap like this, but damn you articulated yourself VERY well.

 

^
Yeah, I suck at grammar

I still think I should go into writting sex novels though, lol

 

Grammatical prowess comes with practice.

The 'shot with violent waves of warmth' line however, is lyrically advanced writing. I think you could have a future writing. Or you could just write a lot of graphic smut.

The people need their graphic smut.

 

Existing, you haven't been to Austin have you? If not you have a twin there.

 

Indeed they do

 

Ive had a dirty mind since I have been alive...its wonderful

 

My mind find it hard to leave the gutter. I can twist anything damn near into something perved.

 

thats hot

 

I think my mind is somewhat more dirty reading that story...

First I thought you were repeating an actual event you had and then took into consideration your age and now I am a perv for reading it!

 

Yeah I thought it was real at first too