of peace and (wo)man kind..

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by quietthinker, Dec 17, 2007.

  1. quietthinker

    quietthinker Member

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    [font=&quot]A tear dripped down from the sun, onto the horizon.[/font]

    [font=&quot]The ripple thrashed the naked land and all was ablaze.[/font]

    [font=&quot]All the gentle were dying,[/font]

    [font=&quot]And all the hateful were holding their heads from the sky.[/font]


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    [font=&quot] The tongue of a mother wrapped around your throat;[/font]

    [font=&quot]She'll digest your ungodly capsule.[/font]

    [font=&quot]Mother spun her web.. laid her egg in your heart[/font]

    [font=&quot]And you despise.[/font]


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    [font=&quot]Just as you wish you could cry with the sun,[/font]

    [font=&quot]You hang from the stars that shine from their forgotten demise.[/font]

    [font=&quot]Engulf an angel with purple hair, who spits fire.[/font]

    [font=&quot]Teach her rites of the men who hypnotixe.[/font]


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    [font=&quot]She'll be a goddess of your mouth, and she'll sleep under the sea.[/font]

    [font=&quot]Like a tear drop never to be seen.[/font]

    [font=&quot]She'll remain yours, eternally at peace[/font]
     
  2. skyfire

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    this piece is powerful...very evocative...keep doing whatever u did here, it works for u
     
  3. blackheartbitch

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    this is amazing :) keep up the good work I would enjoy hearing more from you
     
  4. quietthinker

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    i appreciate the kind words... thank you, sincerely...
     
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