i see in you all eternities of futures you've built from your pasts; a soul alight with intensity- but,can you make it last? i see in you all i love and hate, you're emotions run fire to ice. there's still so much expected in life and you hate the sacrifice. i see in you all that's good but evil lrks just inside... you burn your candle bright to cleanse the places where your shadows hide i see in you all that i condemn.. i see all that i hold dear; but you and i see eye to eye... as i gaze into my mirror
The last four lines crackle! If you can make the whole piece work with the same power as the ending you'll be one of the best I've seen on here.
very well done. yeah, it doesnt do much good to look at ourselves unless we look at all aspects of who we are. thanks~*
