The blue arrows of past

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by art_hippie, Nov 14, 2007.

  1. art_hippie

    art_hippie Member

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    Hey you there...
    can you see those blue arrows crossing the sky
    Can you see them?
    Tell me please
    maybe you used to love me
    maybe you ll remember me
    Can you see them?
    Do you want to escape with me?
    We ll run down this hill all night long
    We ll sing our favorite song
    We ll talk for hours and hours
    like we used to do
    Do you remeber?
    Summertime is gone
    I know its sad...
    i know
    you are cold inside
    or maybe you are not.
    I know you still remeber
    I know you can see those blue arrows.
     
  2. blackheartbitch

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    kind of had a happy feeling in the beginning and then as it went on got melancholy. I sensed a feeling of hurt and loss in it...maybe a lost love or a lost family member. well written. i like your style.

    may peace and love find you
    Amber
     
  3. art_hippie

    art_hippie Member

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    thak you blackheartbitch
    yes its a kind of lots love
    u are right:}:}:}
    lots of sunny smiles
    Nadia
     
  4. groovecookie

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    Powerful magic, sister. The blue arrows are so direct on a feeling level, you know, I mean, the meaning is all in the feeling....at least for me. Anyway, it's really beautiful.
    I couldn't stop thinking about it after I read it. To me the blue arrows sort of represent the passing of time. But that's just how I experience it.
     
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