You said that you love me, but how do i know with the way you're acting? Im trying to fix everything, but you are telling me your not ready. What do i do when the guy i love, doesnt love me? My heart is broken because of the chances i've taken. I must say you are the best thing in my life, but if i cant have you, we cant be friends beczuse my heart continues to break everytime we talk.
First of all try using breaks. They're real helping in guiding the reader and creating a flow. Second, watch the grammar and spelling. And if you should choose to use lower case, try to use it throughout for consistancy sake.
