Tragic magic . . .

This is just a silly thing I wrote real quick about an experience I had, I normally write more serious stuff but whatever !!

(Edit: I just changed the name coz the other one made no sense!)​

Music​

The music speeds towards me​

At a million miles per beat​

It travels from the speakers ​

And knocks me off my feet.​

Then it went right out the window​

And exploded on the street.​

Paralysed on the couch ​

I felt my head begin to slouch​

then I started to drift.​

Each decibel like a bullet headed for the brain,​

Each note fired, hit me hard like a freight train.​

The words become to deep and slow ​

To even comprehend ​

I don’t know what is going on ​

So I start to just pretend.​

Peoples eyes are on me,​

Their smiles start to twist and bend,​

I cant let them see me,​

so I close my eyes and try to make it end.​

But the music is still consuming me ​

And its hard to look at peace ​

When the chaos in my head ​

Just fails to cease.​

Finally the paranoia ended​

And the confusion went away​

I saw a bright kind angel​

Who sent me on my way.​

Serenity took over,​

And I enjoyed the end of the song,​

I had the most intense moment of my life​

And it was only five minutes long.​

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Take out the word "freight." It is a nice poem though.

 

Yeah I didn’t have that there when I wrote it, I added it after because I thought just “train” didn’t describe how it felt enough or something ?! I dunno, thanks anyway !!