another new one

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by blackheartbitch, Oct 22, 2007.

  1. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    The truth shed through broken glass


    The truth finally comes out,
    your hopes and wantings of me are finally said.
    I know without a doubt
    that I cant resist.

    You tell me of my faults
    and blame me for your insanity.
    your words are insaults,
    beating my blackened heart within.
     
  2. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    bump

    all comments and critisism welcome.
     
  3. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Faultless, this is beautiful. *mwah*
     
  4. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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  5. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    i like it.
     
  6. poopzilla33

    poopzilla33 Member

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    what does it mean?
     
  7. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    read it again and then apply to mean something to you...
     
  8. poopzilla33

    poopzilla33 Member

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    well, i like it. i do find personal meaning in it. this is how i read it though

    The truth finally comes out,
    your hopes and wantings of me are finally said.
    I know without a doubt
    that I cant resist.

    You tell me of my faults
    and blame me for your insanity.
    your words are insults,
    beating my blackened heart within.



    you dont have to take my advice at all, just friendly suggestion
     
  9. jacob x ross

    jacob x ross Member

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    A bit cliche honestly.
     
  10. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    poopzilla: thanks i appriciate your suggestion

    jacobxross: how so?
     

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