"Ascending heaven by trampoline"

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by The_Moroccan_Raccoon, Oct 28, 2007.

  1. The_Moroccan_Raccoon

    The_Moroccan_Raccoon Senior Member

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    ascending heaven
    by trampoline in the snowy desert
    the wandering kaballist
    weeps
    ecstatic.


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    my wordless
    mantra hysterically paints
    incendiary arbours
    on the hyperventilating starry midnight sky.


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    the mind
    is submerged.
    i have breathed
    out the last choking bubbles and
    ruptured the viscous surface.


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    i am eternal.
    Adonai i have come to the realization
    i have been here before.
    here. at
    mt sinai jerusalem warsaw auschwitz johannesburg belfast hamilton.
     
  2. The_Moroccan_Raccoon

    The_Moroccan_Raccoon Senior Member

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    i have always been here. my eyes have been turned
    away closed.
    but other eyes
    your eyes have been dilated in awe.


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    Spock handed kaddish tunes
    lysergic acid verses
    to ginsberg. to rothko. to my father.



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    there is a meeting and all
    who searched congregate
    on waves
    respirating above the horizon. i bounce
    toward oncoming jazz psalms.


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    the covenant is exposed
    my fat body frail
    my soul ecstatic
    pulsating throbbing as
    the night sky
    is flooded.
     
  3. Vetty214

    Vetty214 Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed the way you express yourself and your art is wonderful. My favorite parts you wrote are these:

    my wordless
    mantra hysterically paints
    incendiary arbours
    on the hyperventilating starry midnight sky

    the mind
    is submerged.
    i have breathed
    out the last choking bubbles and
    ruptured the viscous surface.
     
  4. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    The whole work is beautiful, many thanks.

    Your 2nd, 7th and 8th paintings are stunning....


    Selah....... & Shalom
     
  5. redyelruc

    redyelruc The Yard Man

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    Wow. something very different to what I'm used to seeing on here. Original and inspiring. Nice...
     
  6. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    You are incredibly talented. I'm in awe! Keep posting! I want this in a book.
     
  7. skyfire

    skyfire Member

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    paintings 3, 7, & 8 were definitely my favorites...enjoyed this very much, thank you...
     
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