Hey man, your stuff is pretty good, especially for being a beginner. I would definitely take the advice Ahimsa gave-he seems to be spot on all the time. My brother used me as a guinea pig when he was first starting out. His stuff has improved exponentially over the past 6 years or so. He also did an apprenticeship at his friends shop. Having someone looking over your shoulder and correcting you all the time is a good thing. You don't develop bad habits that way. Keep at it dude...you seem like you have a good eye.