DOWN THE DRAIN, i miscarriage Poem,Please comment!

Down the drain:nopity:

down the drain, who know's where it goes
where all the water collect's and all the sorrow shows
down the drain, a endless stream of pipe's
twisting and turning endlessly,, thru the earth, where it reunites

down the drain, all my dreams have gone
carried you in my heart for a week
down the drain my future seeps

down the drain like a fish without sea
buried without a name
ended without shame

Down the drain, what a bleak way to mourn
when your child is drained
your soul feels torn

between happiness and sadness
your soul is dispensed
down the drain, in a endless tubing of substance.

My mistakes have shown, my future not set
but yours was from the start
the moment i found i was pregnant!

cause down the drain went your little soul
and my life went down there 2,
with everything i thought "You know"

whatever the reason for your short stay
i know it wasn't in vein
god sent something here for me to reclaim

My life, my children, and my husband
to straighten out my house
to reclaim what was forgotten.

everything happens for a reason
even tho the reasons can be unclear
but i know the propose of your stay
and that was to bring me back here


To my Family...........


10/22/07 Chrissy Lynn

 

my aunt had a miscarriage about two years ago and the whole family went through a tough time. tho you may not see it now, it could be a blessing in disguise...and soon enough if willed you will carry another child.

 

This is beautiful. There's no greater gift than a mind that can learn lessons in even the worst tragedies. You're a stronger soul after going through all of this.

 

thanks very much, but i do believe everythig happens for a reason, even tho at the moment it doest seem like there is a reason. but there is..im sure of it