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a warm welcome to all of you. i'm new here and very pleased with some of the writings wich came to my eye on this forum, thank you for that.

Dutch is my native language and sometimes i write something in English, for you people. I would like to improve my English writing, so i invite you to be as honest as you can be..... Only through sharp criticism i can learn.

world of Divine​

if only you would stop, chasing​

those promises inside your head
you would be able to appreciate
the presents of Life.

you would not see them, as​

obstacles anymore but,
as presence to become One.

you would find your Self, alone​

and naked in a world, beyond
that what meets the eye.

you would be the paint, painter
and the painting in a world of Divine colors.​

you would be the audience of​

a never-ending play
on the stage of Life

come into my world my beloved​

give up your free will, follow
the road of Love
and freedom will fall upon you

cosmic traveler​

I am a spiritual being​

an cosmic traveler
an explorer of the
many dimensia of Life.

It is Love and curiousity wich​

motivates me to explore the
dimensions wich the Father-God
created for His Children.

It is He Him Self who teaches me​

to use concentration
to use visualization
to be in Stillness and observation.

It is trough this that I open doors​

in consciousness and meet my
brothers and sisters on different
levels of existance.

I cross many bridges and I get​

confronted with many gate-keepers
who are presenting me the borders
I once created my Self.

For Now I break them down and
magic falls upon me and with the
speed of Light I am vibrating trough
the formless and magical worlds of Life.

 

Welcome to the forums! My dad is from Amsterdam, what part of The Netherlands are you from? You should check out the Dutch language forum.

I loved your "cosmic traveler" poem. It's beautiful and it emits confidence and shows that you are sure of yourself. Great work!

 

@usfcat

Thank you! I'm from the north part of Holland called Fryslan, maybe you've heard of it? That part of the Netherlands has there own language.

seeker

you are seeking That what
can not be found

on the moment you stop seeking
you will find.

you are trying to understand
That what is not to understand.

on the moment you stop trying to
understand you will understand

you are striving to become
some-one who is no-One.

on the moment you stop
striving to become some-one you will be One

 

I loved when you said this. Such a happy real thought

 

cosmic traveler was really cool

 

Illusion

I Am an illusion
made by pure confusion
never will I be
the one you think to see

 

Im in love with Illusion

 

and illusions with you.

 

Life is Great Fun!!

 

nowhere to hide from this illusion
the emptyness scares me inside
i builded my own world around
through the creation of thoughts
i pretend to believe
it makes me sick not able to sleep
why not simply die?

the animal inside fighting to survive
needing you to compromise
falling as a way of learning to fly
tears melting down my disguise
isn't anything true of what i believe?
i follow the trace of my bleeding heart
until i reach the place where it all starts.

 

Good stuff. I like the second stanza. One small criticism...I would probably drop down from the 4th line and put an adjective before tears(acid tears?). I mean tears always fall down, don't they? I particularly like way you question yourself, doubtingly.
Nice.

Keep posting,
A.

 

Welcome! I've enjoyed your writing. Keep posting.

 

thank you! and A. you're right i will feel about how to change the 4th line.

 

Excellent, expand beyond your conception of limits

Welcome met & Blessings

 

i'm getting greedy i suppose!

when will i fall

and leave this world
without a single trace
to loose myself in empty space
no more time to cover my wounds
i will bleed to death and Love will arise
to wake up the ones with sleepy eyes
my life for them to self-realize.

 

i know...and isnt it sad?

 

@skyfire

not sad just a misunderstanding, no-one to blame

 

angels in disguise

once again I see myself, sitting here
right in front of you
i'm sorry to be not the one
you want me to, will I ever be?
seeing you, i rewind the past
seems there is no way out
then falling into death, what will last?

I am the only One - there is no you
I am the only One - there is no you

once again I see myself, running
in this world inside my head
walking outside, trying to feel alive
while leafes fall of the tree
i press forward to see, in the next moment
where will i be?

I am the only One - there is no you
I am the only One - there is no you

once again I see myself, breaking
down the walls around
fuck you all angels in disguise
you aint't given me shit, it's all inside
so give up your lies for i just realized
i'll never be the one, you think to see

I am the only One - there is no you
I am the only One - there is no you

magixarts

 

i love this one. i enjoyed them all a lot. keep writing and posting im looking forward to more from you

 

thank you bh.bitch

I

I - climb trees
play hide-and-seek with the stars
fly with the eagles
dance with the wind
sing with the birds
swim with the rain
walk with the clouds
meditate with the mountains
talk with the silence
love with fear
breath with joy
- Yes - I smile through the Sun within me