One More Dead Soldier

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by On the schiz, Sep 27, 2007.

  1. On the schiz

    On the schiz Member

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    The zing of bullets
    Assault my ears
    Like the clanging
    Of pots and pans.

    Blood pours from
    Open wounds as water
    Pours from streams.
    All around us the
    Stench of death pervades.

    One more dead soldier
    Lies still.
    One final portrait and
    Pose.
     
  2. emelia

    emelia the resident gangsta

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    I like this poem; anti war with vivid imagery :D
     
  3. On the schiz

    On the schiz Member

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    Thanks. I basically got the idea during a conversation. That happens a lot lately.
     

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