asphalt actualization

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by 2extreme, Sep 24, 2007.

  1. 2extreme

    2extreme Member

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    In this world,
    everything normal is abnormal,
    every sense psychic, and
    every thought real.
    We walk along an unknown road,
    wandering and looking for an ideal perspective
    from which we can see the world
    in a way that is completely objective.

    This objectivity includes
    the feeling that
    everything is entirely connected
    and infinitely collective.


    Some people stare
    while standing on the sidewalk,
    stagnant,
    and others, they continue onward,
    down the same sidewalk as the standers.


    But,
    On the road we are each our own,
    and we find in others what we lack ourselves,
    only to absorb those found attributes
    and become a greater self.

    And even when the road
    is shadowed by the sunless sky,
    we all know, all on the road,
    where we're walking to
    and why.




    Tyler G.
     
  2. RELAYER

    RELAYER mādhyamaka

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    Wonderful poem Tyler, and the point you
    are alluding to is that which is always
    beyond the grasp of the self conciousness
    and human languages, all of them included.
    As Whitman said :
    "My tongue will not fit the pivots.."
    or something like that lol I forget really.
    A new level in human conciousness, the
    3rd movement, and it is growing rapidly
    and eventually to become universal, the
    same as being able to distinguish between
    thousand's of colors. :D
     
  3. she88

    she88 Member

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    i loved this. really its great.
     
  4. Jack Maundrell

    Jack Maundrell C.A.P

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    it remindes me of one that was mine caled the great journey
     
  5. Vetty214

    Vetty214 Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    Thanks for sharing, this was great. I liked the title and how that ties in with the poem, you had good markers connecting it throughout.
     

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