Poem: A bag full of memories

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by SoulWriter, Sep 21, 2007.

  1. SoulWriter

    SoulWriter Member

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    The future made me worried,
    And I forget who I was
    I’m drifting apart
    To nowhere


    I find comfort in peace,
    And I listen to the silence that was given
    Now I’m crawling
    To somewhere


    And I have this bag
    Full of memories
    My thoughts to float away
    To the universe


    My failure is my only fear
    But I learned nothing is fearless
    And my solid ground
    Isn’t more than solid


    I walk behind my footsteps
    Away to nothing and everything
    I walk in my world
    My inside is getting out


    And I have this bag
    Full of memories
    Unspoken letters
    Will be written
    Word by word

    © Soulwriter, 2007



    I'm a bit curious, what you all think of it :&
     
  2. hippyhappy

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    I reall liked it. It speaks of the uncertainty that eveyone feels inside of them. You go through life and you don't really know if you are getting it all right in the moment. Nostalgia always seems to make everything that happens in the past so much better than now.
    I liked to live in the past there for a while and dip too often into my own 'bag of memories' but the only real way forward it to live for the moment.
    Keep on writing! :)
     

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