Up in Arms

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by On the schiz, Sep 15, 2007.

  1. On the schiz

    On the schiz Member

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    We get crazy and fight
    Police sirens in the distance
    The basis of your life is
    A lie
    And we are ageless
    Broken bottle, dental floss
    Much can be used as
    A weapon
    And today we are up in arms
    Clawing at our faces
    To rip off the masks.

    I just wrote this because my grandmother used the expression up in arms and it created an idea. Let me know what you think.
     
  2. art_hippie

    art_hippie Member

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    simple and good:]i like it:]
     
  3. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Nice work.

    Peace and love
     
  4. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    its short and to the point. i like it.
     
  5. On the schiz

    On the schiz Member

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    Thanks you guys.
     
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