in my bed...

in my bed
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in my bed we extend for miles
my knees are shaking from your smile
i'll lay you down, and kiss you
in every single spot you have

i wanna love you like no one else
treat you better than i treat myself
i want you to be my queen
in your eyes it's so serene

i wanna kiss & name everyone of your toes
and all the other places no one knows
i'll bring you flowers pressed in rows
in my bed our love will grow

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"in my bed we extend for miles
my knees are shaking from your smile
i'll lay you down, and kiss you"


that gave me butterflies in my tummy. :& :&
awww that whole poem gave me goosebumps. i love it bebe.

 

heheheeeeeeeee 7 more dayssss....:&

 

I'm tough on writers but that one's a solid effort! Continue to lie with your muse. She seems happy!

 

Hey InBloom - haven't read any of yours for a while. this was so heartfelt and sincere! I love the first stanza most....but naming each of your lover's toes! Wicked!

 

That was beautiful.


Great work, inbloom!