A Play: Part One

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    lol.....dont be a hater. you are the one who brought it up, no?

    there are so many layers to it that i am gonna have to have some time for this and then i will get back with my interpretation(not that you care)
     
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    I also will get back with my interpretation. Still soaking in the layers of mental emotional and spiritual splintering and oneness.
     
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    did you write this johnny or is it one you are interested in interpreting? i am confused about that fact.
     
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    I thank you for sharing your play. There seemed an imbalance of Anima throughout. Sara was a bright light... yet, the mind and its meanings entangled the emotions to confusion. Love for self and others mended by purging. Vast insight into the nuances of thought... evokes C.S. Lewis esp. the Screwtape Letters. Solid insight into altered states and how the unconscious is made visible and magnified. There are so many levels and a rich amount of source material. As a continuum it is splintering and bind-blowing fraught with molested despair and fear, tinged with unity, suffering and orders of being. Peace shall come to a tortured soul. How can Act II balance what has been presented... I shall hope to see more of a presence of Sophia and Anima in their nurturing the mind, with the heart, to wholeness.
     
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    this play sucks.
    (and who on earth continues to view this page?)
     

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