for all. imprisioned,we are not free like lovers light drifting an ocean ,dripping in war i shift alter shelter no more. what transparent skin will cover lieing to all. alone the positive stands. alone we all are,with energy to lick our thoughts confind bodies upon golden blood stained shores. do crave ,longing to dive among tender humans once again,my twisted words do fly. alone in flight, positive tears to drip from eye. a path so chosen,delicate steps,to trample capitalists yes, whilst they wept. alone in darkness,ripples calm.yet sudden change will alter all. alone no more the positive smiles. awaken to reality this world is ours....... lovenpeace from saff. its time to take the stand all humans to take back what the governemtns have done to so many..now ..is the era now...
I like your writing and your ending idea, I'm in the same battle with others. People are responsible, very true, and they need to awaken to that responsibility.
