floating dreams through my mind

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by shobs, Aug 19, 2007.

  1. shobs

    shobs Member

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    rolling thunder across the branch of divinity

    wandering amidst the dreary afternoon

    rain as it falls from the tropical sky

    we dance feverishly feathered in the forest

    growing old to where the ash finally reaches the dust

    and all has become one again

    emerald forests stretching for miles and miles

    cloaked in innocent green to naive travelers

    frothy air floating through dreams

    netting the terrible tirades of our long lost enemies

    searchers out before dawn

    the frost is on the water

    crescent yellow trails forming on the edge of reason

    losing the day, welcome the night

    the twilight edge cuts through the mist rising

    from the valley that is our hopes, dreams

    desires

     
  2. elayne

    elayne no longer available

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    I enjoyed the visualizations and was thinking this would make an awesome song!
     
  3. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    I liked this one, I got a very Amazonian feel from it.
     
  4. JuniperFairy

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    WOW! VERY GOOD! Sounds VERY Doors inspired!l Let's read more!
     
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