Dream Awake

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ReadyForAction, Aug 18, 2007.

  1. ReadyForAction

    ReadyForAction Member

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    Emerging from the shady brook
    He saw children laughing, playing
    The sky a bright shade of orange
    Highlights faces of joyful youth
    A look around revels colors
    The flowers a changing hue
    Quickly red, then quite blue,
    And then another, shade of teal
    As they play lost in jubilant bliss
    Another cut above the grass
    Germans are dancing on television sets
    Unaware of sensual error
    In the fields of love they have not been
    Away for long
    Now look around and see
    For yourself the beautiful
    World
     
  2. shobs

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    shit dude, haha this is good. the words really flow good
     
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