My Heart

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Gothika, Aug 10, 2007.

  1. Gothika

    Gothika Member

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    My heart is a little black dot
    I'm sitting here to watch it rot
    That tiny black hole so small
    Seems hardly adjusted to my body so tall

    I don't want my heart to break
    But I don't want to go through this heartache
    Please save me from this life
    So filled with bitterness and strife
     
  2. Skratch

    Skratch Member

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    if you finish it it could be great
    end it

    drag out the pain and end it with... something
    me thinks its a good start
    just needs a ending

    or maybe not....

    drain the blood
    the heart is wise
     
  3. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    It's okay...short though. And could use some adjusting! ;)
     
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