Shamans awake

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by shobs, Aug 8, 2007.

  1. shobs

    shobs Member

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    Shamans awake

    the escape the dream filled reality of the West

    escaping the hunter’s bows

    striking swiftly and silently through the pale dark gray of morn

    strange reflections across the pond

    obscure faces staring back at us

    waiting to be set free..

    the night welcomes our Presence

    wind whistling through the tall reeds

    tapestry’s fall to the ground

    it is the natural cycle

    of course

    the wolf will break through

    rabbits flee in fright

    escaping in the direction of the moon

    their fate is similar to ours

    the leaves have rotted

    stars have ended

    the path constricts into impassableness

    the moon is setting

     
  2. shobs

    shobs Member

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    comments are always welcome [​IMG]
     
  3. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    It has a thick folklore vibe to it. I liked it, it's very solid.
     
  4. blackheartbitch

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    its kind of got a hidden meaning...basically all life is meant to have the same dreadful fate. i like your choice of words it makes it strong
     
  5. shobs

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    well i meant it to be that we are all doomed to the same fate if we dont free our minds to psychedelic philosophy
     
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