Sorrow's Bane

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by mr_alleycat, Aug 3, 2007.

  1. mr_alleycat

    mr_alleycat Member

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    Love is the one thing
    That keeps our spirits whole
    When Sorrow comes a knocking
    With hurts that touch our soul


    When our world falls around us
    And darkness fills our dreams
    It’s love that lifts our spirits
    And bridges Sorrow's streams

    Love calls us from the brink
    Of being swallowed by the stream
    Dispels depression
    And warms us in it’s gleam

    Love helps us through the horror
    Of love lost or led astray
    Through mans trespass
    Or angels spirit them away

    Love comes to give us comfort
    And wipe away the tears
    Love will shield our spirits
    When Sorrow's shadow nears

    Love’s light whisper
    Will stifle Sorrow's gain
    In life’s losses
    Love is Sorrow’s bane


    mr_alleycat
     
  2. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    It's very good.
     
  3. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

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    I've read this before............


    Ed Schmidt, summer of 2006.

    Are you Mr. Schmidt?
     
  4. mr_alleycat

    mr_alleycat Member

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    Thank You Freaky,
    For responding to my poem:)

    That be me Mal,
    I hope you ejoyed it then, and now;)
     
  5. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

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    Oh I did. And I still do. Nice work.
     
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