America the free

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Jack Maundrell, Aug 2, 2007.

  1. Jack Maundrell

    Jack Maundrell C.A.P

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    America the free
    thats what we used to be.
    America the free
    why can't we just see.
    America the free
    this fascist regime threatening me.


    America the true
    Always watching over you.
    America the true
    blood red, white and blue.
    America the true
    oh whats happened to you.


    America the brave
    soldiers names that die in vein.
    America the brave
    our lives caught in a daze.
    America the brave
    is there any left for us to save?


    America the free how I miss thee
     
  2. Malapascua

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    You know, I think this is the best piece I have read from you.
    I wish it was longer.
    Great work.

    I don't know if you are into polatics or not, but maybe this should be sent to all our senators and congress people.
     
  3. Jack Maundrell

    Jack Maundrell C.A.P

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    I'm not to keen on making my poems too long. Have you read the journey down the path to light?
     
  4. Malapascua

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    I found it on page 7 and i am reading it now.
     
  5. Malapascua

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    I read it and posted a comment.......
     
  6. mr_alleycat

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    I enjoyed this,
    I've been on a politic rant since 03. That is when I realized we've been had:(
     
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