crazy day

Discussion in 'Random Thoughts' started by dezmondzpipe, Jul 29, 2007.

  1. dezmondzpipe

    dezmondzpipe Member

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    so....i went to bed at about 5 AM last night and couldnt really sleep cause i didn't take my sleeping pill.....I'm trying to drop the habbit cause i'm becoming dependant on them....so i finally fell asleep at about 8 or 9, and woke up at about 10 to my dad hammering something into the wall somewhere. i tried to sleep a little more and it didn't really work because my dog kept licking this wound of his....i'll probably take him to get one of those lampshade things for his head so he can't keep infecting it. so at about 12:00 I decided I'd get up, so i went downstairs to play some gears of war and maybe eat something.......i didnt eat anything.....when i asked my dad if there was anything for lunch he began to nag me about getting a job. It is my intention to get one and i've been looking regularly for one....so i got really pissed and my brother started bugging me about borrowing my commputer.....so i eventually gave it to him.....and got really pissed off and left, I drove around for about 2 hours feeling completely dazed, having not slept hardly....i eventually found this cool park with a river and i dipped my feet in for a bit, and it made me happy. the bad news was that i did some odd movement and pulled a muscle in my side and it felt odd all day.... i then walked arround and decided to lay in some grass and get a little bit of a sun tan, cause i'm pretty pale and never take my shirt off when im outside....i felt great after that...i came home and my dad was like, where did you go, and i said i went to get the mail!....my brother said the great quote from the movie rock star "he said he had to take a piss and never came back" or however it goes....so i went up to my computer and talked to my friend on AIM and he was sort of pissing me off, so i was like i got to go, and i did.....i went back downstairs and my dad started bugging me about stuff....so i went and watched some old home movies with my brother....we eventually decided to make some spigetti cause i was fucking starving.......so we went to the store and made some...we also got stuff for smores......i ended up making it all, which kind of pissed me off, but whatever.....as i was making it i was wrestling with my brother a little bit and he punched me in the side...the side that was in incredible pain...and i was like.......noooooooooo.....and i was again rather pissed off.....we were eating dinner and i could hardly eat any of mine even though it was pretty damn good.....it was fucking bizzare cause i was fucking starving.....after that my friend who pissed me off earlier called and was like....hey man you have to come over we're playing original trilogy trivial pursuit, and i was like i dont feel like it....but i eventually did anyway...after we played that we went driving around and did all this crazy shit....crazy ass shit....like shouting things at girls walking around, listening to disney soundtracks and putting stuff in peoples yards......and i was having the time of my life.....when i got home at about 4 my brother was still up and was like hey, lets make smores and i was like yeahhhh......so we did and they rocked and afterwords i decided this day needed to be documented because it was so crazy, so i wrote this................the day started out shitty...became awesome...became shitty...became awesome...became shitty ...became awesome and stayed that way until now and now im going to sleep..........................manic depressive?????????
     
  2. Biggen

    Biggen Banned

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    Punk Punk Punctuate
    Your statements and commands
    Just make a dot--a period
    Right at the end it lands

    Punk, Punk, Punctuate
    All questions that you ask
    That little squiggly line and dot
    Completes this easy task

    Punk, Punk, Punctuate
    Exciting words you say
    If it shows strong feeling
    Line and dot ! are here to stay

    Punk, Punk, Punctuate
    Abbreviations too
    Initials here and titles there
    What's a dot to do

    Punk Punk Punctuate
    A comma seperates
    Your items in that list you wrote
    As well as years and dates

    Punk, Punk, Punctuate
    Apostrophes a lot
    Contractions use them all the time
    Replacing 'o' in 'not'

    Punk, Punk, Punctuate
    To tell the time of day
    The hour, colon, minutes
    Happy times are here to stay
     
  3. stinkfoot

    stinkfoot truth

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    Huge run-on paragraphs are a less than comfortable read. The line divisions between blocks of text limit how much will need to be re-read should I miss-scan and lose my place.
     
  4. dezmondzpipe

    dezmondzpipe Member

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    it's supposed to create the impression of a long and crazy day......dot dot dot dot.......not a functional essay style bullshit story! WORD! This also isn't english class, so i didnt require advice on punctuation!
     
  5. I'minmyunderwear

    I'minmyunderwear Newbie

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    well i'm sure it created several impressions, i just doubt that anyone bothered to read it
     
  6. lace_and_feet

    lace_and_feet Super Member

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    Do you believe in the power of the full moon?
     
  7. dezmondzpipe

    dezmondzpipe Member

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  8. LuckyStripe

    LuckyStripe Mundane.

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    Hmmm.... that was last night and I had the most ordinary of days and nights then but today and tonight have been a bit odd as my whole mood and viewpoint was changed when I woke up.
     
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