THE RAIN" chrissy lynn

"The Rain"​

7/04/07​

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Thunder in the distance Rumble's​

Lighting take's the air in flight​

Humble Nature is taking care​

Of Life, in the cold stormy night​

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Rumbling Empregnactant's the ground​

Sound's of Pounding rain drop's surround​

The Darkness of the unknow around​

Deep tall tree's, with year's of history renouned​

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Crubbing of a water drop​

Bounce's off the tree's​

Lighting strike's in the mist of autum Leave's​

Bird's are taking refusue in hollowed out Tree's​

Praying for a life withing the Reaves​

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The rain subside's ​

in the cold dark night​

As the Shaddow's of the moon​

Cast on the ground with ultravoilet light​

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The humidity of the air​

creat's droplet's on the flower's ​

Hearing the Mist collect ​

Distance Rain drop falling for hour's​

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cricket's sound the song​

of another summer night gone​

Crupping of a bat in the ditance​

mark's another night of resistance​

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Light wind blowing out the air​

In the silence a deer walk's​

without any care​

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Dripping of Dew​

Fill's the Forest wall​

Sound's of nature are heard​

But No human is heard at all​

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The ground Now Moist from a night of stormy weather​

Bring's on a new begining for Nature's ultament tether​

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New life is all around​

Just open youre eye's and see​

Our Earth is our lifeline​

Taken care of it is Key!​

 

if you wrote that... then kudos. its really amazing. if you didnt right that... then all i can say is that you have a good choice in poetry.

 

one thing i never do is i never ever copy anyone else's work, i can
asure you it is mine, check out some of the typo's still in the piece that
i didn't correct yet, i give deep thought to my poem's, what i right come's from my heart, my other poem i have on this form is (the baby that shouldn't exsist"
check that one out and comment about it.
thank's veyr much

 

So descriptive, excellant work!

 

thank's very much, i wrote it only a week or so ago, when it was raining , and i sat down and listened, no one really ever listen's to the rain, but sometime's

it would amaze you what you will hear as you listen to the rain. something so simple..

 

a very good read , really like it

peace

 

Wow that brought a tear to my eye. It made me think how beautiful our planet is. It also made me think of what were doing to our planet and what people aren't doing about it. It's sad. About your poem, I really enjoyed it. You made me feel like I was there. Your delightfully descriptive! I really enjoyed this piece! -Cassi

 

wow nice. second one i read by you. far far far better than that baby one imo. the baby the shouldnt be was a bit too self indulgent for my tastes, but i really like this one. keep it up

 

amazing.

i hope my skills develop so i can write like that someday. :]

 

thanks alot, i been writing since i was 15 year's old, im 26 now, so it has been a long time for me, and the older i get and more expriences i have in life, the better my writing get's, cause i see thing's in way's no one else take's the time to see them or at least most of us , and it reflect's in my work, thank's so much for the comment's, this is the first time i ever posted anything that i wrote online, so it is a pleasure to hear what other people think. Thank's so much.

 

thanks very much

 

yeah thanks