Tunnel

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by The Instinct, Jul 27, 2007.

  1. The Instinct

    The Instinct Member

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    I tried writing something different with this like "Change". Again, comments/replies welcome.


    Please let me be free from this
    I hate feelings this way
    I'm pulled back before I can succeed
    I can't seem to get very far.
    My life is one big tunnel

    I don't understand why...

    Realizing I can't live life fast enough
    I feel sick all over my body
    Cause by wanting freedom early
    I push forward but I lag behind

    Trying to understand myself
    I just crawl my way each day
    It's dark all around
    I can't look back nor forward
    My life is one big tunnel

    I can't look back nor forward
    It's dark all around
    I just crawl my way each day
    Trying to understand myself

    I push forward but I lag behind
    Caused by wanting freedom early
    I feel sick all over my body
    Realizing I can't live life fast enough

    I don't understand why...

    My life is one big tunnel
    I can't seem to get very far
    I'm pulled back before I can succeed
    I hate feeling this way
    Please let me be free from this

    c. 2007
     
  2. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    I completely understand! This is really good! :)
     
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